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green pleased with snow

I am treading into the traces from the last winter

like a hummingbird

which seems to stay on the right place

however the breathing is not so warm

not falling deaper into icy snow

and I am sure that I am not roaming

'cause the sky above us

seems to me the same

also the placement of sand as a basic stone

was weighing me downd

like before

when they promised lowering the pressure

and the snowdrops jumped from the ground

only a fraction sooner than I thought
Dátum vloženia 17. 6. 2008 22:02
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  1. Majzi

    Dear Milson. English version is better than slovak. Much smoother and clearer. Well done.
    Good luck!

    17. 6. 2008 23:56
  2. eufrozina

    snowdrops jumped from the ground...no krasa...

    20. 6. 2008 00:42